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Bio: I like singing, dancing, chilling on forums, makng friends, and drinking. I like to write stories. You can read my stories at: http://www.xanga.com/Tyleya
Interests: Games, Guitar, Music,
Occupation: What's that? Honest Toil? You wouldnt catch me dead working. Ok so i do work. You want my SS# too?
Location: On a milk carton
Posts: 647
Join Date: Jan 2006
Rep Power: 10  
Gensei Chuuritsu
Daesy: is sleepy
Daesy is:
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Now if i take yur man, thats too bad
You can kiss my ass you ****in fag
Have him all night ****in on his back
Once i get him back to my bachelor pad
Sit back chill letcha see my thong
Make you cum real hard at the end of the song
He love what i do, baby boy don't fight
You should listen to my boy, his name is Nyte
Show me how defenseless you really are!
Death is only the begining.
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Last edited by Daesy; 06-26-2008 at 09:41 PM.
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Bio: Im A Girl what do you expect
Interests: music
Occupation: student
Location: under the moon and stars
Posts: 140
Join Date: May 2006
Rep Power: 38 
Aaura is:
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I’m A Girl
So What If I Joke So What If I Cry
So What If A Guy Breaks My Heart And I
Want To Die
It’s My Feelings That’s How I Let Them Out
Or Sometimes I May End Up To Scream And Shout
I’m A Girl That’s What I Was Born To Do
Break A Few Hearts Than Say Boo Hoo
I’m A Girl No Matter How Many Times
You Look At Me
That’s Just How Your Going To See Me
I’m A Girl That’s Attached To Her Emotions
My Heart Goes In All Motions
My Head Is Up In The Sky
While My Hearts Is On Its Last Thread To Die
I’m Sick Of The Lies I’m Sick Of Just Staring
And Making Sighs
I’m A Girl That’s Not Going To Change
My Heart Being Mended Back Together Is
Out Of Its Range
I’m A Girl God Damn It Whether You Like It Or Not
My Feelings May Get Tied Up In A Knot
Because Boys Like You Make Me Like This
And That’s Something I’m Never Going To Miss
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Bio: Uh...
Interests: Training, Movies Video Games
Occupation: U.S. Army Soldier
Location: Ft. Lewis, Washington
Posts: 74
Join Date: May 2008
Rep Power: 0 
Nyte is:
Level up: 82%, 9 Points needed |
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Uh...Bravo....?*shrugs*
Stayed on topic, wordplay was a little simple though.
Consistant flow, just not what I' used to...(Too Rated G! >.<)
But overall, pretty good.
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Bio: Im A Girl what do you expect
Interests: music
Occupation: student
Location: under the moon and stars
Posts: 140
Join Date: May 2006
Rep Power: 38 
Aaura is:
Level up: 99%, 2 Points needed |
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Thanks, I Dont Normaly Cuss In mY Poems Unless im Mad
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Bio: Uh...
Interests: Training, Movies Video Games
Occupation: U.S. Army Soldier
Location: Ft. Lewis, Washington
Posts: 74
Join Date: May 2008
Rep Power: 0 
Nyte is:
Level up: 82%, 9 Points needed |
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You were always there.
When things were going wrong
You made it all right
You were there at my darkest moment
to bring me to light.
And when I'm full of doubt
You fill me with hope.
You untie the knot
when the ropes 'round my throat.
I'm thankful, Y'know? what more can I say?
It's hard to speak
when you take my breath away.
So beautiful, of all my freinds
you're the very best, boo.
And my feelings would be stronger
If only I met you.
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Bio: Uh...
Interests: Training, Movies Video Games
Occupation: U.S. Army Soldier
Location: Ft. Lewis, Washington
Posts: 74
Join Date: May 2008
Rep Power: 0 
Nyte is:
Level up: 82%, 9 Points needed |
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I can't think of a flow to spit.
It over, kid! Game over, shit!
There goes my hopes!
There goes the dreams
of supermodels in gold robes
I think I choked, nope think agian!
I flipped the standard
Cuz I wasn't fittin' in.
Then quicken the pace
erase what was once cool
School these fools
While I try to balance myself
on this class clown stool.
you laugh now, dude.
But where was you when hip-hop died.
I think I cried that night.
Now I'm who I used to be.
I shedded a tear when NaS gave the uligy.
You people foolishly follow crews
I crush crews with jewlery
I'm not the type to mess with
I step on pessents like a King. I'm just doin' my thing.
I'm the prophet of truth, I'm just lightin' the ring.
So I suggest you remain low. Cuz I say so
Get away from my AO, or I'll give you a halo.
Wake up Mr. West, I missed ya class today though
I'm still fresher than a Vest that's lees than a day old.
My flows is runnin' like it south of the boarder
Jumpin' bars like Pedro, no body moves harder.
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Bio: Uh...
Interests: Training, Movies Video Games
Occupation: U.S. Army Soldier
Location: Ft. Lewis, Washington
Posts: 74
Join Date: May 2008
Rep Power: 0 
Nyte is:
Level up: 82%, 9 Points needed |
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How many of my these flows have I released?
Thought in rhythm
still my style ain't deceased.
It's boilin' hot, I won't stop,
used again like grease.
I look back sometimes
and I can't believe
All the times I wrote,
These songs came from me.
And it's not an act, all of this is real.
It's the emotions I felt
It the pain I feel.
I write whatever's clever
don't wonna start drama
and I shine like the weather
in a clear day at the bahamas.
"Oh, I think they like me"
'matter fact I know they do
I always keep my nose clean
like a soldier is supposed to do.
So hate on the sideline
you can't relate what I'm goin' through
I do what I do best, so **** what you think is cool.
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Bio: Uh...
Interests: Training, Movies Video Games
Occupation: U.S. Army Soldier
Location: Ft. Lewis, Washington
Posts: 74
Join Date: May 2008
Rep Power: 0 
Nyte is:
Level up: 82%, 9 Points needed |
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I just heard the song "Miss Indenpendent" by my favorite song writter; Ne-yo.
The second I heard it I had to post my piece on such an inspiring song.
It also got me thinking about my interst in women.
Latley I've been involved with some...not so indenpendeny women and I realize that I shouldn't settle for someone who settled for less. I believe I'm the best guy I can be so it's only right for me to be with a woman that is the same way, right? No one should settle, I sure as hell won't. Anyway here my little piece I wrote like 5 seconds after I heard the song. Enjoy!
She walks like a boss, talks like a boss
Got it all together, but still got me lost.
She's not with the games, she brush the playaz off.
A bit of a tough girl, but her legs look soft.
I can't explain it, it amazing
how she does what she does
she don't need me but she wants me
theres no buying her love.
She got the car and a crib,
not ten baby daddies.
Great career and body
yeah, mami got a phattie!
Butt! I mean however,
She got a nice body, she prefers to use her mind.
Shorties a diamond in the desert, her type is hard to find.
I lovin' her style, and shes got the right mind.
I gotta step my game up, she's leavin me behind cuz....
She walks like a boss, talks like a boss.
Buys her own rings, now matter the cost.
She moves like a boss, works like a boss
Any man who leaves her, suffers a great loss.
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Bio: Uh...
Interests: Training, Movies Video Games
Occupation: U.S. Army Soldier
Location: Ft. Lewis, Washington
Posts: 74
Join Date: May 2008
Rep Power: 0 
Nyte is:
Level up: 82%, 9 Points needed |
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They say the never miss you 'til you dead or you're gone
So on that note , I'm leaving after this song.
Physic!!
This ain't a jigga bite. Dis ya ni**a Nyte.
Comming back in the game brinin' in a lil' light.
I see ya'll donme lost ya'll way
Next time Nyte is here to stay, ok?
No Way they gonna hold me back
I throw my best up on every rap
Where you at Daesy, Baby!? (Yeah!!)
Tell 'em that the champ is back!
What up everybody? I having some connection problems so I'll be off and on for a while.
I like the way you guys changed the site pretty cool.
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