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Bio:
Uh...
Interests:
Training, Movies Video Games
Occupation:
U.S. Army Soldier
Location:
Ft. Lewis, Washington
Posts:
74
Join Date:
May 2008
Rep Power: 0 
Nyte is: 
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Nyte's Notebook
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06-05-2008, 01:02 AM
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This is really simple.
This thread is my notebook, I plan to write any song or poem I can think of here random or not. (Mostly random)
Post comment if you'd like I don't mind, and if you think you can do better PLEASE let me know. lol!!!
It's the..N-Y to the Teezy E
I ride rough like X, still cruz like Easy-E
Stay clean but a playa is from the street
White Ts, Nikes and a Jesus piece
Ballcap on the left side
that the way I like mine
try to **** the kid, on some dumb.
and your ass will end up flat-lined.
I swear this the last time, yup!
That I blast rhymes at asses
who can't get there acts lined.
My raps signed up wit the facts
that's what's up.
Instead of theses fellow are jelious
Cuz their cash time's up!
If you don't get that
and ya ass is like "what"
I mean money over bullshit.
Hip-hop has dropped
no longer ballin like the lakers.
Legend of this shit is replaced by the fakaz
who done forgot about the soul
cuz it's more about the papaz.
That wasn't much but it my first I'll get better over time.
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Bio:
I'm a First Lieutenant for the U.S Army
Interests:
Video Games
Occupation:
Military Police Officer of the 118th Military Police Company
Location:
Ft.Bragg, North Carolina
Posts:
217
Join Date:
May 2006
Rep Power: 40
First Lieutenant Riza Hawkeye
Sergeant Dreamer:
U.S Army Soldier
Sergeant Dreamer is:
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totally niz. Aaura does poetry too, but your's seems more of a rap. *Salute*
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We are the ones, standing alone everywhere,
Around every corner, we are always there.
We are there before you come, and there after you leave.
No other soldiers are as disciplined as we;
The battles we face are usually the worst.
But when it's time to go, we are the first
Patrolling on post or conquering the field,
At home or abroad, we will never yield.
We have trained hard to be the best;
Wherever we go, we stand above the rest.
Taking every mission, with courage we survived;
Though many were injured and many have died.
As Military Police, we Defend, Assist, and Protect;
For all our fallen comrades, we show the utmost respect.
Being "Of the Troops and For the Troops"
is harder than we thought;
We never could have imagined
the battles we fought.
When you are off defending
the home of the free,
Look by your side,
There Will Be An MP.
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Bio:
I like singing, dancing, chilling on forums, makng friends, and drinking. I like to write stories. You can read my stories at: http://www.xanga.com/Tyleya
Interests:
Games, Guitar, Music,
Occupation:
What's that? Honest Toil? You wouldnt catch me dead working. Ok so i do work. You want my SS# too?
Location:
On a milk carton
Posts:
648
Join Date:
Jan 2006
Rep Power: 10
Gensei Chuuritsu
Daesy:
is sleepy
Daesy is:
Credits: 299,737,989,902,049
Level up: 80%, 41 Points needed |
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Very good. Can we add some to your notebookness?
Show me how defenseless you really are!
Death is only the begining.
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Bio:
I like web disigning
Interests:
World of Warcraft <3
Occupation:
A matenance man
Location:
*points to map* HERE!
Posts:
604
Join Date:
Jul 2007
Rep Power: 45
Gamerz Place Grammar Nazi
Cruentus:
is lonely.
Cruentus is:
Level up: 67%, 50 Points needed |
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Really good Nyte. I liked it. It could use a little work, but as you said you just started it.
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Bio:
Just ask me I don't bite...
Interests:
Computers, Cars, VideoGames, Movies, Music
Occupation:
Webmaster/Student
Location:
Outworld, Canada
Posts:
3,930
Join Date:
Jan 2006
My time is ticking away....
Nitz is:
Points: 22,922, Level: 93 |
Level up: 58%, 428 Points needed |
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man.. we gotta get you a record deal!!!
Gamerz-Place is looking for staff... PM Nitz for more info.
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Bio:
Uh...
Interests:
Training, Movies Video Games
Occupation:
U.S. Army Soldier
Location:
Ft. Lewis, Washington
Posts:
74
Join Date:
May 2008
Rep Power: 0
Nyte is:
Level up: 82%, 9 Points needed |
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*Returns Salute*
Thanks u guys, I still got a long way to go to get where I used to be...
I use to be crazy with it. But I gave up and its had to start over...:P
An yes Dae, you can add if you want.
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Bio:
I like singing, dancing, chilling on forums, makng friends, and drinking. I like to write stories. You can read my stories at: http://www.xanga.com/Tyleya
Interests:
Games, Guitar, Music,
Occupation:
What's that? Honest Toil? You wouldnt catch me dead working. Ok so i do work. You want my SS# too?
Location:
On a milk carton
Posts:
648
Join Date:
Jan 2006
Rep Power: 10
Gensei Chuuritsu
Daesy:
is sleepy
Daesy is:
Credits: 299,737,989,902,049
Level up: 80%, 41 Points needed |
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You let that Depu Fool from that lame a** forum mess ya up. His rhymes sucked anyway.
Show me how defenseless you really are!
Death is only the begining.
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Bio:
Uh...
Interests:
Training, Movies Video Games
Occupation:
U.S. Army Soldier
Location:
Ft. Lewis, Washington
Posts:
74
Join Date:
May 2008
Rep Power: 0
Nyte is:
Level up: 82%, 9 Points needed |
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The Memeries... NO!!!!!
Don't say that!!! >.<
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Bio:
I'm a First Lieutenant for the U.S Army
Interests:
Video Games
Occupation:
Military Police Officer of the 118th Military Police Company
Location:
Ft.Bragg, North Carolina
Posts:
217
Join Date:
May 2006
Rep Power: 40
First Lieutenant Riza Hawkeye
Sergeant Dreamer:
U.S Army Soldier
Sergeant Dreamer is:
Level up: 2%, 147 Points needed |
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what's goin' on?
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We are the ones, standing alone everywhere,
Around every corner, we are always there.
We are there before you come, and there after you leave.
No other soldiers are as disciplined as we;
The battles we face are usually the worst.
But when it's time to go, we are the first
Patrolling on post or conquering the field,
At home or abroad, we will never yield.
We have trained hard to be the best;
Wherever we go, we stand above the rest.
Taking every mission, with courage we survived;
Though many were injured and many have died.
As Military Police, we Defend, Assist, and Protect;
For all our fallen comrades, we show the utmost respect.
Being "Of the Troops and For the Troops"
is harder than we thought;
We never could have imagined
the battles we fought.
When you are off defending
the home of the free,
Look by your side,
There Will Be An MP.
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Bio:
I like web disigning
Interests:
World of Warcraft <3
Occupation:
A matenance man
Location:
*points to map* HERE!
Posts:
604
Join Date:
Jul 2007
Rep Power: 45
Gamerz Place Grammar Nazi
Cruentus:
is lonely.
Cruentus is:
Level up: 67%, 50 Points needed |
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Nyte when you gonna post some more. i cant wait to see it >.<
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