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08-26-2008, 05:29 PM


Oops....My bad. I am sooooo sorry. Umm....I'll change it.






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08-26-2008, 06:24 PM


I have a son, what the!? Where did he come from!?




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08-26-2008, 06:25 PM


I think you mean he, dude.








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[Today 06:03 PM] Stickman: It will be funny
[Today 06:03 PM] Stickman: see what they would say
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[Today 06:02 PM] Stickman: I got a long day tomorrow
[Today 06:02 PM] IBeatSephiroth: Your being mothered by a twelve year old
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[Today 06:02 PM] Stickman: haha
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[Today 06:02 PM] IBeatSephiroth: Ahh... I mean.. LIE DOWN AND SLEEP!
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[Today 06:01 PM] IBeatSephiroth: ...
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08-26-2008, 08:41 PM


Leave my typos alone!! ><



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08-26-2008, 09:14 PM


Lol, okay. I won't correct you. I also think we should stick to the topic. Thanks for changing my character, Dae.








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[Today 06:03 PM] IBeatSephiroth: Mabey I sould put this conversation on my sig
[Today 06:03 PM] Stickman: It will be funny
[Today 06:03 PM] Stickman: see what they would say
[Today 06:02 PM] Stickman: Im going to tell people that
[Today 06:02 PM] Stickman: haha
[Today 06:02 PM] Stickman: I got a long day tomorrow
[Today 06:02 PM] IBeatSephiroth: Your being mothered by a twelve year old
[Today 06:02 PM] Stickman: I think I should
[Today 06:02 PM] Stickman: haha
[Today 06:02 PM] IBeatSephiroth: lol
[Today 06:02 PM] IBeatSephiroth: Ahh... I mean.. LIE DOWN AND SLEEP!
[Today 06:01 PM] IBeatSephiroth: Go to bed!
[Today 06:01 PM] IBeatSephiroth: ...
[Today 06:01 PM] Stickman: but I haven't been late in forever
[Today 06 PM] IBeatSephiroth: its your last warning!
[Today 06 PM] IBeatSephiroth: Your teacher will be mad if your late again!
*Stickman throws fit*
[Today 05:59 PM] Stickman: I don't wanna
[Today 05:59 PM] IBeatSephiroth: He's sleeping, like you should be, young man!
[Today 05:58 PM] Stickman: I think he got off
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[Today 04:28 PM] Nitz: transformation......complete!
[Today 04:27 PM] Nitz: IBS has transformed!!!!
[Today 02:43 PM] Daesy: yep she did
[Today 02:40 PM] E.V.: did IBS just go black?
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08-26-2008, 10:18 PM


The story, I like it. It's new, it's nothing I've seen before. I can't imagine what will happen next which is what makes it so interesting. I just wonna know where that kid of DeMarcus' came from. Does the story go into that? And whats with the family that had the throne before DeMarcus? I'm sure dae will fill in the gaps, I just wish she'd keep typin'!!!!!



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08-27-2008, 01:47 PM


All will be revealed in time.






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08-29-2008, 06:56 AM


Sorry i'm late with the next chapter. I'm about to have a freer schedule, i hope. Also i edited it a little so if you read it before 10:19am EST, you might want to skim through the last two paragraphs.

Chapter 6: Preparations

The Laesea army traveled to the outskirts of the Hsing Shun pass. Adora and Daesy rode together. "Look. Smoke." Adora said. On the other side of the pass was the Appolonian army.
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DeMarcus was already halfway to Lasea. The pass was pretty easy to pass through. The mountain tops were topped with snow, but the valley was passable. "We camp here." DeMarcus said. His army of 10,000 camped at the gate of the pass.

Nitz and DeMarcus was making a stratagy of how to attack when Sephie walked into the tent. "Yes Masamune?" DeMarcus said. He always called her by her last name. "Why have we stopped? We could continue and be at the palace in two days time." DeMarcus shook his head. "No. These Laesean's are not as weak as they seem. And Daesyana isnt stupid either." DeMarcus said. "A woman leads them. If a woman can rule over Appolonia, why are you afriad of one now." Sephie exclaimed. DeMarcus stood up and looked her in the eyes. "I am King. I make the decsions. See that you remember." DeMarcus was calm but his eyes showed his anger. "Excuse me. Your Majesty." Sephie sneered. She walked out the tent. "For now." she added.
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Daesyana was trying to figure on the best course to take. "Dajoa. Get two messengers ready. One headed for the the Appolonians, The other headed for Laesea." she said. "Sir!" Dajoa said leaving. "What course are you taking?" Adora asked. "The safest for the people at home." Daesy said.

Finally three messengers came in. "What are your names?" Daesy asked. "I'm Lalith, this is my brother TTK, and this is Ryo." the woman answered. "Lalaith. You will go to Laesea and tell Savior, to be prepared for the Gensei. TTK and Ryo, if you are both brave, go through the pass and ask for terms.. Take this." she put a necklace over TTK's and Ryo's head and laid it on their necks. "The pass is full of traps. This will protect you both. Make haste!" They all went there way. "We haven't used that in centuries." Dajoa said. "Well, I will make history. Besides we shall see if it will work." Daesyana said.






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Chapter 7: Delivered

TTK got on his horse, Spectrum, and rode towards the army. Ryo followed him. TTK hummed a tune as he rode. But his tune went to a slow halt as he got to the top of the hill that was on the other side. There were thousands, literally. "My God." Ryo exclaimed. Tents upon tents in the war camp. Though this was more than he expected, he was a strong young man who learned magics and warfare in school.

They took a slow trot towards the army. They made it the edge and two guard haulted them. "Who are you?" they asked. "We are messengers. Nothing more. My master has a message to give to his highness." TTK said humbly. "Its his majesty your churl. Come along."

TTK looked only with his eyes not turning his head. The army was huge. But they were not as advanced as far as magic was concerned. The the battle was by brute strength, Appolonia would win. But Laesea had magic on there side.

Finally they made it to DeMarcus tent. TTK got off his horse and walked into the tent. Ryo stayed on his. "A messenger from Laesea." the guard said. DeMarcus was looking at maps, his back was turned. He finally turned. Brown hair, Brown eyes and a haughty look. TTK had to hold back from thinking and laughing at how Daesyana will wipe that haughty look off his face. "Well messenger. What's the message?" DeMarcus asked. "Her Majesty, the Queen Daesyana wants to discuss terms." TTK said. "Ahhh terms of her surrender." Nitz asked. "The terms for peace. She will not surrender." TTK said. "Let me kill him, your Majesty." a guard said. DeMarcus didn't skip a beat. "Tell her..they are no terms." TTK nodded and said, "I will tell her that." He bowed and made his way to his horse. Ryo followed him.

DeMarcus looked at Nitz. "How many men does it take to deliver a message. Nitz grabbed a crossbow and replied, "One." then he shot the arrow.






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Chapter 8: Savior

While TTK and Ryo traveled one way. Lalaith went back home to Laesea. The journey showed many sights of Laeseans preparing for the war. It was summer time. Almost time for picking grain from the fields. No one was preparing. No one was out at all. Laesea was deserted. Many of the population went to the capital, Taeko.

Lalaith finally got to Taeko. She ran into the palace, her armor clanking. Running as fast as she could she went to the temple. The acolytes blocked the way. "I need to speak to Savior. Queen Daesyana's orders!" she yelled. They moved out the way. She ran inside and saw Savior. Savior was a blond woman who was over 500 years old. No one really knew why she was so old and looked so young. "What is it my child?" she asked Lalaith. Her voice was patient and smoky, with wisdom. "Daesyana told me to tell you to prepare the Gensei. She will signal when it is time." Lalaith confirmed. Savior smiled. Daesyana was bold. Her grandfather didnt use the Gensei. The men seemed to fear it. But this woman was ready to take risks. "Tell Daesyana i am ready when she is." Savior said.
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DeMarcus got his army ready. They were about to march across the Hsing Shun. Confident in his victory, he was going over terms of surrender. He wrote a letter.

Queen Daesyana,

We will discuss terms of surrender. My advisors and i have came to the same concusion. Besides Appolonia, Laesea is one of the biggest countries. I have no legal heir, and no wife. When we capture your city, your life is in my hands. You will become my wife, Queen Daesyana of Laesea and Appolonia. Prepare yourself.

Your King and future husband,
DeMarcus Nyte


He had his Falcon, Henry, and put the letter in his talons. He let it fly to the Laesean camp. "Fate Is Exon