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yes keep it comming
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no no leave
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you have got skill
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no aious J.R
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March 7th, 2006
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Fire Hyrule Temple
Posts: 603
My Title: Soldier
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I dont like the yankees
this my first song ok a rap really
Ill make one every week if you like it
I dont like know one that's why I live on my own
I like to use the tellephone but I it is usually a hobbo
they also like homoer too when they like to ask
for money because they are stupid like cupid
oh oh oh the yankees are dumb
they must burn burn burn down with the whitehouse
they must burn burn burn because they dont like us canadians
Burn baby burn and at the end the end the yankees fell into the well
then since they were bad they all went too hell
then the hobbo's took over!
Burn Baby Burn!!!!!
that the learic's like post if i keep making these every tuesday they get funnyer and funnyer.
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March 8th, 2006
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Kinda weak rap, the lyrics are nothing more then hate against Americans and its overall really weak. :/
But its a good start, you just gotta build on your rhymes and the words you pick and you'll be fine bro.
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Jaime - 5462 - ended with that post count...... still a legend of the forums!
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March 8th, 2006
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My Title: Magi Knight
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Never again. You can't spell, your word is is off, and other than that, RAP IS GAY!
RAP IS G A Y!
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Veritas & Aequitas - Truth & Justice
Faveo Maximus Pravus Prae Sanctimonia Ortus.
Inclined To Do Great Evil Before Sanctity Becomes Visible.
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March 9th, 2006
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so i think ill continue then!
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March 9th, 2006
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-1 point for all canadians...that was a terrible rap...it wasn't even a rap lol
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March 11th, 2006
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OK i have another but i hste it ill post it on lader to day
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March 12th, 2006
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Location: Albuquerque
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Originally Posted by Darkmoon the Exile
Never again RAP IS GAY!
RAP IS G A Y!
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I MUST AGREE WITH THIS LOL
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"If anything in this life is certain; If history has taught us anything, it's that you can kill anyone."
"Regret nothing, Fear Less!"
"Just when I thought I was out, they pull me back in."
Click to show spoiler Extreme ways are back again
Extreme places I didn't know
I broke everything new again
Everything that I'd owned
I threw it out the windows, came along
Extreme ways I know, will part
The colors of my sea
Perfect color me
Extreme ways that help me
They help me out late at night
Extreme places I had gone
But never seen any light
Dirty basements, dirty noise
Dirty places coming through
Extreme worlds alone
Did you ever like it planned
I would stand in line for this
There's always room in life for this
Oh baby, oh baby
Then it fell apart, it fell apart
Oh baby, oh baby
Then it fell apart, it fell apart
Oh baby, oh baby
Then it fell apart, it fell apart
Oh baby, oh baby
Like it always does, always does
Extreme songs have told me
They held me down every night
I didn't have much to say
I didn't give up the light
I closed my eyes and closed myself
And closed my world and never opened
Up to anything
That could get me at all
I had to close down everything
I had to close down my mind
Too many things to cover me
Too much can make me blind
I've seen so much in so many places
So many heartaches, so many faces
So many dirty things
You couldn't even believe
I would stand in line for this
It's always good in life for this
Oh baby, oh baby
Then it fell apart, it fell apart
Oh baby, oh baby
Then it fell apart, it fell apart
Oh baby, oh baby
Then it fell apart, it fell apart
Oh baby, oh baby
Like it always does, always does
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